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Feelings on presentation

Today we did our first pitch ‘presentation’ to the client. Overall, I think that they liked many of the ideas that we came up with, especially so the ones that we were fonder of. Their favourite ideas were the story of home, and the carbon particles idea. 

I felt that the presentation went well overall, and we all contributed. Except from Charlotte, who did not add anything to the presentation as well did not speak up to the clients. This is not the first time that this has happened as well. This happened last presentation, afterwards when asked about it she said that it was due to her confidence that she did not speak up in the pitch, however she also did not add to the actual slides which does not take confidence to do. 

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